I've tweaked the blurb slightly, so here's the new version:
Ysabel became the Goddess of Fall’s Avatar to care for
animals, but her kind heart may prove fatal to her loved ones.
When a pair of strange animals, part bird and part lizard,
invade the country of Challen during a magical weather storm, Ysabel must learn
if they’re ordinary creatures or if they’re connected to Salth, the Season
Avatars’ sworn enemy. However, the clawfeet are resistant
to her magic.
After tragedy strikes the Avatars, Ysabel comes up with a
desperate plan to allow all twelve of them to face Salth together as required
by the Four Gods and Goddesses of Challen. Jealousy, however, tears an ally
from the Avatars during their most vulnerable time as even more beasts rise
against them. If Ysabel cannot control the strange animals and use justice as
well as mercy, she will not only lose her position as Avatar but the people she
loves.
4 comments:
Congratulations!
The blurb reads much tighter now.
Thanks, Alex!
Huzzah.
Much better. Well done.
PS. I've shared your link on Facebook.
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