Last month, I finished the second draft of Season's Beginnings,
Book One in my fantasy Season Avatars series. I am currently looking
for beta readers for this project. Here's what I have so far for the
blurb:
Kron Evenhanded is an artificer, able to enchant any
man-made object, but he finds people more difficult to work with. As he
visits the city of Vistichia, he encounters Sal-thaath, an extremely
magical but dangerous child created by Salth, another magician Kron knew
at the Magic Institute. Kron attempts to civilize Sal-thaath, but when
his efforts lead to tragedy, Kron is forced to ally himself with a
quartet of new deities and their human Avatars. Together they must
defend Vistichia as Salth attempts to drain its life and magic. But
Salth has Ascended halfway to godhood over Time. Will Kron’s artifacts
be enough to protect the Avatars, especially the woman he loves, or will
Time separate them?
If this sounds like something you'd like
to beta read, please comment below or e-mail me at
ulbrichalmazanATsbcglobalDOTnet. If you have any suggestions for
improving the blurb, please let me know that as well. Thanks!
Just filled my critique partners slots. Blurb sounds good. My only suggestion is the word 'when' in place of 'as' to begin the second sentence.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the suggestion, Alex!
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