The First 25 Words

Authoress has graciously offered to host another critiquing session on her blog. This time, she asked that we send in the first 25 words (or less if otherwise you'd submit an incomplete sentence) of our novels to see if people would keep reading. Mine is #66. I'm not sure how well it hooks the reader, but I figure this is a good way to find out. Please feel free to head on over there and comment--not just on mine, but on other people's as well. There are so many entries Authoress had to post them in two waves!